-- by Divya T S
Evideyanu nee ariyillenikku
ninnajathamaam roopam
njan kanda swapnangalile midhyayo nee
perariyathoru shilpithan srishtiyo
ushasil dalathilirikkum manjuthulliyo nee
atho,hassikkum sumangalo;
vasanthathin madhuramaam thennoottum bhramaramo nee
ethannu nin roopam ariyillenikkath
sayahnangalil enne thalodum thennalo nee
atho aakashath kanchimmum tharakangallo
enne pulakamaniyikkum snehamo nee
ariyillenikku ninne
onnu mathramariyam ......enn
sukha dukhangalil aaswasam pakarum thozhanannu nee
oradhrisya thozhan...........
1 comment:
This caught my attention because it was a poem and I always admire people who can sing out their thoughts. But to give you a fair comment, it was just an 'ok' poem. Being a genuine admirer of poetry and poem I have this one question to ask you - why is it that even at this age people only write about their insecurities and frustrations? Are we so much laking in novel ideas? Don't we have anything else to think about than our insecurities, longingness and desires?
I didn't mean to give a negative comment. Please take this as a constructive criticism.
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