Dec 21, 2008

Unnathangalil (poem)

-- by Anila

Anavasarathil pradarsippikkan
ente sneham randam tharamalla.

Ninakkath avasyamillenkil
njan athu tharikayilla.

Ente mathram sampathanathu,
njanathin ekadhipathi.
Ente sneham ninakku samarpikkan
njan yachakayvilla.

Oru kaiyil ninakkay
ananthamay nirayunna
pana pathram perumbol,
marukaiyil enthinu ninte
bhikshaykay yachana pathram?

Chakravarthiniyay njanee
simhasanathil irikam.
snehathinte chakravarthiyakil
ninak oppamirikam.

yachakanay nee varendathilla.

unnathangalil ninnu
nam pranayikkum,
unnathangalil ninnu mathram.

1 comment:

Ekanthapadhikan said...

Kudos kudos!! I have not heard a voice bold enough for a long while. Everyone sings about their weakness, cravings, desires and here you are, declaring the "unnathi' of love. Yes that's how it should be - "Chakravarthiniyay njanee
simhasanathil irikam.
snehathinte chakravarthiyakil
ninak oppamirikam."

I really loved those lines. Love is not a weak emotion. The passion behind is not weak either. It's an exhilarating emotion and you have rightly captured it!!!!